Some creepy shit...
You could've made it a bit sexier, you know. It would be a better fit for the moans on that girl. Put some hair on her head and and have something going into her instead of something coming out of her.
And who was that dude who shot himself? What was that all about?
For the last part, you seemed to have intended to put a little extra work into that. I think I like the music at the end. Although I could not hear the whole thing...